Comments on: Please critique my cover letter.? http://computerassetmanagement.org/528/please-critique-my-cover-letter/ Computer Asset Management Wed, 08 Sep 2010 02:06:59 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: Dragon'sFire http://computerassetmanagement.org/528/please-critique-my-cover-letter/comment-page-1/#comment-619 Dragon'sFire Wed, 10 Feb 2010 10:36:59 +0000 http://computerassetmanagement.org/528/please-critique-my-cover-letter/#comment-619 you need some changes," for the opening of customer service specialist" retail, what?. use more paragraphs take out the fun part, working with the public is not fun, and they would not take you serious. education should be listed, and special qualifications should also be listed separately and not thrown all together. Do not list classes that you will be taking. List the ones you have taken . The ending is very good, needs work. It isn't July yet, and don't send it so soon. wait for the opening. Never start a sentence with "As" Take out the xxxxs, hugs, (I know it's your signature, isn't it?) Maybe a few hugs and kisses would help! just kidding.<br><b>References : </b><br> you need some changes," for the opening of customer service specialist"
retail, what?.
use more paragraphs
take out the fun part, working with the public is not fun, and they would not take you serious.
education should be listed, and special qualifications should also be listed separately and not thrown all together.
Do not list classes that you will be taking. List the ones you have taken .
The ending is very good, needs work.
It isn’t July yet, and don’t send it so soon. wait for the opening.
Never start a sentence with "As"
Take out the xxxxs, hugs, (I know it’s your signature, isn’t it?)
Maybe a few hugs and kisses would help! just kidding.
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]]> By: Rachelle http://computerassetmanagement.org/528/please-critique-my-cover-letter/comment-page-1/#comment-618 Rachelle Wed, 10 Feb 2010 09:59:59 +0000 http://computerassetmanagement.org/528/please-critique-my-cover-letter/#comment-618 Wow thats really impressive!! :) good job and it sounds like you would be dedicated, they have no reason to turn you down. good luck, too!<br><b>References : </b><br> Wow thats really impressive!! :) good job and it sounds like you would be dedicated, they have no reason to turn you down. good luck, too!
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